6 things to avoid in a dazzling video script for social

Jonna Ekman

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November 17, 2021

March 20, 2025

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If you’re truly confident in your script writing, you certainly know what to do and what not to do. But as with all creation, there are a few things to keep in mind. Here are 6 things to avoid when writing video scripts for social videos. 

This article is an excerpt from our comprehensive e-book, "How to Write Winning Scripts for Videos on Social Channels." Want to create compelling video scripts that engage your audience and drive results? Download your free copy today!

1. Avoid Rhetorical Questions

Rhetorical questions can be a powerful way to grab attention, but in a fast-paced 60-second video, they can confuse your audience. If you’re not 100% sure they add value, leave them out to keep your message clear.

2. Cut Out Tautologies

Why use two words when one will do? Phrases like "warm up," "serious crisis," or "completely unique" take up unnecessary space. Instead, keep it concise with just "warm," "crisis," or "unique."

3. Eliminate Redundancy

Wordy phrases, or “word salads,” dilute your message. Instead of saying "because of the fact that I...," simply write "because I…." A clear, direct script makes your video more impactful.

4. Use Short Sentences Instead of Dependent Clauses

Long, complex sentences can slow down the pace of your video. Instead, break them up into shorter, punchier sentences to maintain a dynamic flow and keep viewers engaged.

5. Avoid Unnecessary Headings

While headings help structure blog posts and articles, they can clutter a video script—unless you’re creating a purely informational video. Keep it fluid to ensure a natural, conversational tone.

6. Reduce Text Overload

If a slide in your video feels too text-heavy, it probably is. Instead, simplify your message, spread it across multiple slides, and use visuals to reinforce key points. A clean, easy-to-read format enhances viewer retention.

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